I find it interesting how I'm still tweaking dialogue - even from a published book to better make it fit the flow of the comic. Some of it I go "D'oh! Why didn't I think of that before!" (The conversation with Mira in the previous chapter was a perfect example)

Same thing with this page ("Why do you need Paul?" is not in the novel... but it totally should have been! LMAO!).

I thin Angelina keeps picking poor levers with our intrepid former Captain. We'll find out why next page! :D